The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, there are two making processes. The picture on the left depicts the
cement
production process
while
the diagram on the right shows the usage of
cement
in the production of concrete. Regarding
cement
production stages, we have limestone that
together with
clay is crushed resulting in powder. Following the stages of the
cement
-making process, there is a mixer where the powder goes through until it reaches a rotating heater mixer. After that stage of heating and mixing the powder, the result is dropped on a grinder.
Finally
, the
cement
is now ready to be utilised, as it is put into bags for usage. The concrete-making process details are in the next diagram on the right. It begins with a concrete mixer
that is
filled with 15%
cement
added by 10% water, 25% sand and 50% gravel. It is explained that gravel is another way of naming small stones. After all these components are heated,
as a result
, we have the concrete.
To conclude
,
it is clear that
both products have a necessity of being mixed during their fabrication.
On the other hand
, we outline that only
cement
possesses a need to be heated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • construction
  • cement-making
  • raw materials
  • crushing
  • mixing
  • heating
  • grinding
  • cement powder
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • concrete
  • versatility
  • strength
  • aggregate
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