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many individuals opt for rented houses, rather than purchasing their own property.
This
essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of renting a
house
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and will provide a logical conclusion.
The two main advantages of living in a rented
house
are relocation convenience
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and cheap prices.
Firstly
, the main reason
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renting a
house
is that
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many
people
can relocate from one
house
to another whenever they want some alterations. They can easily shift anywhere in the country, or any city of their choice,
according to
their needs and requirements.
For example
, an army officer gets a job transfer from one city to another, he will
then
choose any place
according to
his needs and convenience, and
then
rent
a
house
for himself. Another reason is,
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people
cannot afford
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a
house
. Since they don'
t
have enough money, they prefer living in a rented
house
, which is less costly.
individuals or families don'
t
purchase a
house
because they don'
t
have enough resources, or they don'
t
have enough money to build one for themselves.
However
, renting a
house
also
has some disadvantages like paying
rent
and rude landlord. First and foremost, the major demerit of renting a
house
is to pay the
rent
every month. When there is no source of income, or when the salary is low,
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it will be quite arduous to pay
rent
. There will be
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pressure of paying the amount every next month, which I think is a major
.
Conversely
, if someone has a purchased
house
, they don'
t
have to face the problems of paying money.
For instance
, many
people
in my hometown own their houses
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and are tension free in
this
matter.
However
, on the other side, many are worried when the deadline
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paying
rent
is near. Another reason is, having a rude landlord, who has no manners to speak politely. Often
such
type of landlords don'
t
care about
people
, they just care about cash.
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of
people
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.
Therefore
, having
such
a rude and impatient owner is actually
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and a disadvantage as well.
However
, properly choosing and renting a
house
can eliminate these demerits.
To conclude
,
although
renting a
house
has certain disadvantages like high
rent
rates and rude
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, it has some extremely beneficial merits as well. I believe that
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benefits of renting a
house
outweigh its drawbacks.