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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's corree and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's corree and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the result of a survey in five different cities of Australia (
Sydney
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,
Melbourne
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, Brisbane,
Adelaide
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 and
Hobart
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) about the purchasing and use of
coffee
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 and tea.
This
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 survey was conducted over a month.
Overall
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,
Melbourne
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,
Hobart
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 and
Sydney
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 witnessed a high ratio of buying fresh
coffee
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.
Whereas
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, Brisbane and
Hobart
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 were interested in purchasing instant caffeine.
However
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,
Adelaide
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 accounted for the least for going to the cafe for it. Looking at the details, fresh
coffee
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 consumers,
people
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 of
Melbourne
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 city
together with
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Hobart
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 equally accounted for 63% and
Sydney
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 slightly lower than that which was 61%.
whereas
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,
Adelaide
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 recorded the least 49% as compared to other cities
people
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. For
people
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 who drink instant
coffee
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, the residents of the city
Hobart
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 were using it in high amounts 54% and lower in
Sydney
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 46%.
However
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, Australian
people
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 who went to the cafe for different types of
coffee
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 and tea witnessed a downward trend. Brisbane
together with
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Adelaide
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 shared an equal percentage of 34%.
While
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 in
Sydney
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people
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 went the cafes more accounting for 44%.
Although
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, rest of cities was between 33% to 42%
Hobart
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 and
Melbourne
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 respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, together with, whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sydney, melbourne, adelaide, hobart, coffee, people with synonyms.
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