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The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The pie chart illustrates the amount of nutrient present in two different kinds of supper(Medium Baked Potato and Macaroni).The types of
nutrients
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 present in both food items are carbohydrates, protein,glucose,other
nutrients
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 and saturated fat.
Overall
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, it can be said that Medium baked yam has almost similar kinds of nutritional value present
in contrast
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 Macroni has variation and the carbohydrate has the highest proportion.
To begin
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 , the medium baked potato has only 10% of saturated fat
while
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 in macaroni it is double i.e. 21%.The amount of carbohydrates is 35%, protein 25% and glucose is 15% in a baked yam with a minimal percentage of other
nutrients
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 at 15%. On the other ,hand the majority of the macaroni is covered with carbohydrates which is 52%.The protein content is less as compared to a baked potato.
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 , the other
nutrients
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 have fewer percentages i.e. 5%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words nutrients with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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