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The charts below show spending patterns between the US and UK in 2000

The charts below show spending patterns between the US and UK in 2000
The chart illustrates the proportion of
money
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 spent on four categories which were food, cars, restaurants and computers in the US and the
UK
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 in 2000,
also
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 making a comparison between the
two
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 countries.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the chart that the expenditure on food was the highest in the US,
however
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, in the
UK
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,
money
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 spent on cars was the major. Among the
two
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 countries, computers were the least popular. In the US, food cost was the highest among the four categories, which was nearly half of the total expenditure. The figure was lower in the
UK
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, which was almost 40
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percent
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per cent
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, whilst cars were the most popular in
this
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 country with about 45
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percent
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per cent
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 of the
money
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 spent. Americans only spent nearly 30
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percent
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per cent
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 of total expenses.
On the other hand
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,
money
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 spent on computers was the least among the
two
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 nations, which was only a tenth of the total
money
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 spent in the US, and
two
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 times higher than that in the
UK
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. The expenditure on eating in restaurants accounted for about 15
percent
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 and
this
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 figure was the same for both the US and
UK
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, uk, two, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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