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the family values are deteriorating ,what are the positive and negative changes? what is your opinion

#values #changes
In
this
 modern era family values are
disbalanced
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imbalanced
 nowadays
due to
overuse
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the overuse
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 of gadgets and drug addiction . I will discuss both positive and negative thoughts in the upcoming
peragraph
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paragraph
paragraphs
. I think it is a negative development. To commence with, family values are now deteriorating
due to
distance
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the distance
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 maintained in
families
.
Firstly
, distance maintained in
families
are
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is
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due to
 addiction
of
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to
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 gadgets and toxic substances. It is a negative development in
family
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the family
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 because
due to
this
families
 cannot sit together and talk to each other which will lead to fights in
family
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the family
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. To
examplify
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exemplify
, In
bengal
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Bengal
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, a son
kill
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killed
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 his mother
beacause
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because
 his mother
snatch
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snatched
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phone
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the phone
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 from his son.
On the other hand
, there are some positive changes of deteriorating in
families
such
 as
families
 are now
dependable
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 on each other they only have one person in their family who
do
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does
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job
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the job
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 to feed their family which will
also
 lead to fights in
family
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the family
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. It
also
raise
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raises
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 the cases of divorce. To elaborate with
example
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an example
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, In
gujrat
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Gujrat
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, a husband kicked his wife out because his wife was dependent on him and
remain
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remained
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 free all day.
To conclude
,
i
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I
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 restate my opinion
fights
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that fights
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 raised
due to
 deteriorating in
familiss
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families
 cannot be neglected in front of being dependent on
families
.
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