The table shows the number of people (millions) that remain undernourished around the world from 2000 to 2009. The chart displays the global price of two food grains over the same period. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the number of people (millions) that remain undernourished around the world from 2000 to 2009. The chart displays the global price of two food grains over the same period. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information about the number of malnourished people in millions worldwide from 2000 to 2009;
whereas
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the line graph illustrates the
price
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of two main foods, namely
rice
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and
wheat
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at
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in
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the same year. The prices are presented in the US dollar.
Overall
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, as the prices of these two sources of food increased considerably, the number of undernourished individuals has
also
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significantly increased. Looking at the data in more detail, in 2000, there were 857 million people in the world suffering from malnutrition.
This
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figure
,
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continued to rise every two years, and
at the end
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of the period, individuals reported as undernourished were 1034 million cases. In terms of the
price
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of
rice
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and
wheat
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, we can see that there was a fluctuation in
wheat
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's
price
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from 2000 until 2006, which ranged from 200
dollars
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to 400
dollars
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per
ton
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. From
this
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point. The
price
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of
wheat
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experienced a dramatic increase, reaching its peak in 2009
with
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1100
dollars
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per
ton
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.
In contrast
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, the
price
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of
rice
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remained stable from 2000 until 2004 at 200
dollars
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per
ton
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, after
that
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,that
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there was a slight increase in the
price
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to 300
dollars
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per
ton
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in 2006. From
this
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point, the
price
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of
rice
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had a similar upward trend, and
at the end
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of the period, the
price
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for a
ton
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of
rice
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was 900
dollars
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, rice, wheat, dollars, ton with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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