The table shows the number of people (millions) that remain undernourished around the world from 2000 to 2009. The chart displays the global price of two food grains over the same period. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table provides information about the number of malnourished people in millions worldwide from 2000 to 2009;
whereas
the line graph illustrates the price
of two main foods, namely rice
and wheat
at
the same year. The prices are presented in the US dollar.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, as the prices of these two sources of food increased considerably, the number of undernourished individuals has also
significantly increased.
Looking at the data in more detail, in 2000, there were 857 million people in the world suffering from malnutrition. This
figure,
continued to rise every two years, and Remove the comma
apply
at the end
of the period, individuals reported as undernourished were 1034 million cases.
In terms of the price
of rice
and wheat
, we can see that there was a fluctuation in wheat
's price
from 2000 until 2006, which ranged from 200 dollars
to 400 dollars
per ton
. From this
point. The price
of wheat
experienced a dramatic increase, reaching its peak in 2009 with
1100 Change preposition
at
dollars
per ton
. In contrast
, the price
of rice
remained stable from 2000 until 2004 at 200 dollars
per ton
, after that
there was a slight increase in the Add a comma
,that
price
to 300 dollars
per ton
in 2006. From this
point, the price
of rice
had a similar upward trend, and at the end
of the period, the price
for a ton
of rice
was 900 dollars
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, rice, wheat, dollars, ton with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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