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Nowadays, certain problem are rising because of rising in number of citizens in the major towns of the world. Discuss about the issues and solutions to overcome it.

#citizens #towns #world
Everybody knows that the big
problem
 with big
cities
are
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is
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 crowded. Everyone wants to live in
cities
, there are can find to
tiater
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titer
,
cinama
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cinema
, job, good
education
 social life, etc. When
this
 is the case, it is inevitable
cities
crowded
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 more than
more
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while
coming
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 some problems. Nowadays, a
lot
 of governments are living
the
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problem
 and they
couldn'tt
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couldn't
 find a
solution
about
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 it.
This
 article will deal with
this
problem
 and its
solution
.
First,
if people can find everything in a village like a good
education
 for their children,
good
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and good
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 jobs they don't want
live
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 in
cities
. That's why whatever
have
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is
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 in the
cities
 must be in the villages,
then
 moving to
cities
 can be stopped.
For example
, one of the
angineer
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engineer
engineers
 lives village and can work online as I saw the TV. We
livelives
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live lives
 in technological times and can make a
lot
 of jabs online like
angineer
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engineer
engineers
, teachers, and even
education
. They make to reduce moving in the
cities
. One day, a
lot
 of people will want to live in villages when ingress ills in the
cities
.
Secondly
,
that
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the
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problem
's reason is bad political decisions, like planning
cities
, let's build construction.
For instance
, İstanbul is the
best
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most
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 crowded city in Turkey.
Because many
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 bad political decisions made it so worse city
such
 as
,
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don't
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not
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have
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having
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 green places there and buildings being very high. On the other side of the topic is economic problems. A
lot
 of citizens of Turkey can find jab in İstanbul because many factories and
bussines
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businesses
 placa have there. Tu sam up,
population
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the population
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 in
cities
 get worse by day by. It has many simple solutions
however
 people don't want to find a
solution
 because very important to earn money . In my opinion, the
problem
solution
 is
good
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a good
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education
 that's why we have to make
pover
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more pov
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 our
education
 system It
shouldn'tt
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shouldn't
 be forgotten, problems are born from ignorant.
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