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I am very pleased that my CV satisfied your requirement and gave me a chance to present myself. I am available on all dates and time you have offered and I think since the deadline is closing sooner time on September 1st would be better.

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 and gave me a
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 to present myself. I am available on all
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 you have offered and I think since the
deadline
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 is closing sooner
time
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September
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 1st would be better. I am very pleased that my
CV
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 satisfied your
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requirement
Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
show examples
 and gave me a
chance
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 to present myself. I am available on all
dates
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 and
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time
Fix the agreement mistake
times
show examples
 you have offered and I think since the
deadline
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 is closing sooner
time
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 on
September
Use synonyms
 1st would be better. I am very pleased that my
CV
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 satisfied your
Use synonyms
requirement
Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
show examples
 and gave me a
chance
Use synonyms
 to present myself. I am available on all
dates
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 and
Use synonyms
time
Fix the agreement mistake
times
show examples
 you have offered and I think since the
deadline
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 is closing sooner
time
Use synonyms
 on
September
Use synonyms
 1st would be better. I am very pleased that my
CV
Use synonyms
 satisfied your
Use synonyms
requirement
Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
show examples
 and gave me a
chance
Use synonyms
 to present myself. I am available on all
dates
Use synonyms
 and
Use synonyms
time
Fix the agreement mistake
times
show examples
 you have offered and I think since the
deadline
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 is closing sooner
time
Use synonyms
 on
September
Use synonyms
 1st would be better.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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