The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart and table provide information concerning the
tourist
from 4 regions of origin including Asia, Europe, Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
US
, and Correct article usage
the US
other which
Fix the agreement mistake
others who
spending
Wrong verb form
spend
holiday
at Add an article
the holiday
a holiday
particular
resort in Australia. The data can be divided into 2 parts, namely, the pie and the details of Add an article
a particular
tourist
spending time Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
in
vacation which Change preposition
on
explain
Wrong verb form
are explained
the
table. In terms of the chart, figures are given in percentage units.
Change preposition
in the
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that peoples from Asia are the region who most traveling
to Australia Change the spelling
travelling
however
, they showed the lowest number of
average staying length.
Correct quantifier usage
apply
To begin
with the pie chart, the people form
Europe and Asia are the top two Correct your spelling
from
nation
that visit Australia on holiday which is 37% and 35%.Fix the agreement mistake
nations
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