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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#aim #science #people #lives
Science
's highest goal should be to promote individuals' lives. Does
science
 should even have a goal? Or it is just a sort of way that humanity has to get through because we can. In
this
 ,essay I am going to discuss both sides of
this
 matter. It is noteworthy to point out that
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 creativity leads them to places which not all of them are even worth searching for.
Therefore
, there are inventions that even destroy human
life
although
 they can improve other’s
life
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 ironically
For instance
, the atomic bombs that hit
Hiroushima
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Hiroshima
 and Nakazaki so maybe
instead
 of describing
science
’s aim as a
life
quality
 promoter, the attitude behind it should be considered. In an eutopia
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science
 is fully separated from economic goals, though it’s not true
for example
 health studies
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supported by cosmetic companies are mostly
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manipulated results. Whilst, academic studies can actually be used as a promotion of lives, meanwhile, there are scientists who work hard and ambitiously to reach findings that could lead to inventions or methods that people can use in daily
life
 or at least help a group of people,
although
 it’s hard to innovate new things,
science
 engine will never stop. It should help people to increase their
life
quality
 and quantity. In summary, Scientific findings are founded on our knowledge gaps which are exactly the issues that we are facing,
further
 problems decrease our
life
quality
.
Consequently
 solving the issue is increasing individuals'
life
quality
,
thus
 it can be dangerous if it
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 in
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 hands.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial role
  • technological advancements
  • medical discoveries
  • life-changing inventions
  • innovations
  • solutions to human problems
  • enhancing quality of life
  • improvement of healthcare
  • transportation
  • communication
  • agriculture
  • energy sectors
  • eradication of diseases
  • prolongation of life expectancy
  • global challenges
  • climate change
  • overpopulation
  • food security
  • developed world
  • underprivileged communities
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