Human activity has had a negative impact on planet and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others think actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
Undoubtedly, for decades, human activity on
Earth
has negatively affected the environment, causing massive problems Use synonyms
such
as global warming and the extinction of various flora and fauna in the Linking Words
world
. Some Use synonyms
people
argue that the damage cannot be reversed as it is too extensive. Use synonyms
However
, the opponents including myself believe that there are several steps that can be taken to slow down or even reverse Linking Words
this
condition.
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To begin
with, the Linking Words
world
we are living in today has changed in the Use synonyms
last
20 or 30 years. One of the most significant changes is rising the Linking Words
Earth
's temperature, leading to other issues Use synonyms
such
as rising the sea level and melting the polar ice that some Linking Words
people
say could not be repaired. Use synonyms
This
in return may cause many lands to drown. Indeed, it is predicted that in 20 years Jakarta, the capital of Indonesia will drown, if the authority does not take significant steps to mitigate Linking Words
this
issue. Another argument proposed by the Linking Words
people
who believe that damages to the Use synonyms
Earth
are non-reversible is that many animals or plants have already extinct or are in great danger. Use synonyms
Therefore
, the Linking Words
Earth
at some point will Use synonyms
also
extinct.
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However
, In my opinion, there are several actions that can be taken to reduce the damage to the Linking Words
Earth
. First of all, I agree that the main problem we face today is probably global warming as it affects all Use synonyms
people
around the Use synonyms
world
. In fact, the main cause of Use synonyms
this
problem would be the CO2 emissions from vehicles and industrial activities. Linking Words
Therefore
, reducing greenhouse gas emissions may greatly reduce the Linking Words
Earth
's temperature. Use synonyms
In addition
, many countries in the Linking Words
world
have started to replace coal and fossil fuels with green energy sources to reduce the emission of Use synonyms
this
gas. Electric cars have Linking Words
also
been introduced worldwide, and gaining popularity. Linking Words
Also
, there are a few steps that can speed Linking Words
this
positive development. Linking Words
For example
, governments can put tax exemptions for citizens who own electric cars, and the public contributes by promoting a more environmental choice Linking Words
such
as using public transport to commute Linking Words
instead
of private vehicles.
In conclusion, I believe that there is a lot we can do to save our planet, Linking Words
such
as reducing greenhouse gas emissions by using electric cars and encouraging the use of greener energy sources.Linking Words
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