The two pie charts illustrate why British do migration to and from during a question period.
These two pie charts demonstrate the
reasons
why people
immigrated to or emigrated from Britain
in the year 2007.
The chart on the left belongs to the reasons
why people
immigrated to Britain
. The most prevalent reason
is to have a definite job which takes up to almost a third of this
population. The scond
most frequent Correct your spelling
second
reason
is to have formal study in Britain
. These two combine to cause more than half of the immigration. Accompany, to look for work and other reasons
are the next most frequent reasons
respectively. Also
, 6% of the immigrants' reason
is not clear.
On the other hand
, the second chart belongs to the people
emigrating from Britain
. To have a definite job is the most frequently stated reason
for this
phenomenon. Furthermore
, people
immigrating to other countries to look for work, count for the second largest populatoin
of emigrants. Oddly enough, 18% of emigrants did not state a Correct your spelling
population
reason
. Moreover
, other reasons
and
Correct word choice
apply
then
, Correct your spelling
than
to join
other Change the verb form
joining
people
are the next most frequent reasons
for their emigration and eventually, to have
a formal study is the least prevalent Change the verb form
having
reason
for British emigration accounting only for 4% of the emigrants.Submitted by a.ansari3103 on
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