The two pie charts illustrate why British do migration to and from during a question period.
These two pie charts demonstrate the
reasons
why Use synonyms
people
immigrated to or emigrated from Use synonyms
Britain
in the year 2007.
The chart on the left belongs to the Use synonyms
reasons
why Use synonyms
people
immigrated to Use synonyms
Britain
. The most prevalent Use synonyms
reason
is to have a definite job which takes up to almost a third of Use synonyms
this
population. The Linking Words
scond
most frequent Correct your spelling
second
reason
is to have formal study in Use synonyms
Britain
. These two combine to cause more than half of the immigration. Accompany, to look for work and other Use synonyms
reasons
are the next most frequent Use synonyms
reasons
respectively. Use synonyms
Also
, 6% of the immigrants' Linking Words
reason
is not clear.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the second chart belongs to the Linking Words
people
emigrating from Use synonyms
Britain
. To have a definite job is the most frequently stated Use synonyms
reason
for Use synonyms
this
phenomenon. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
people
immigrating to other countries to look for work, count for the second largest Use synonyms
populatoin
of emigrants. Oddly enough, 18% of emigrants did not state a Correct your spelling
population
reason
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, other Linking Words
reasons
Use synonyms
and
Correct word choice
apply
Linking Words
then
, Correct your spelling
than
to join
other Change the verb form
joining
people
are the next most frequent Use synonyms
reasons
for their emigration and eventually, Use synonyms
to have
a formal study is the least prevalent Change the verb form
having
reason
for British emigration accounting only for 4% of the emigrants.Use synonyms
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