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The plans show Ashford in 2010 and Ashford now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The images illustrate the transformations that have
been
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taken place in the town of Ashford between 2010 and the present.
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, it can be clearly seen that the city experienced a significant development in infrastructures and facilities during the period. In the present, the most noticeable change in the residential
area
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 the
area
 is expanded and
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blocks of flats have been built in
this
area
 beside
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the east bank of River Tam. The ferry that was in service in 2010, currently it has been changed with a road bridge crossing the River Tam. The Yacht marina has been completed in order to provide new facilities for the residents to harbour their small vessels and a new road has been built to give
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access from Ashford City to the Yacht marina. In the southwest of the map, there were empty areas in 2010. Nowadays, the
area
 has been planted with trees, and perhaps it will become a nature reserve
area
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