The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The given map illustrates two prone locations for introducing a new supermarket in a
town
called Garlsdon with 65,000 residents.
Overall
, what stands out from the map is that while
the first suggestion is located in a suburban area, the second one is exactly offering it in the centre of this
town
.
Looking at the first offered location, S1, it is suggested to introduce the northwest countryside of the town
near the railway which crosses from southeast to the Hindon town
neighbour on the northwest of Garlsdon which has 10,000 inhabitants.
The second suggestion is in the middle of the town
centre in an area with no vehicle access. This
no-traffic zone is surrounded by housing areas that have industry districts on both south and north of it. Furthermore
, not only is this
supermarket located just south of the railway but also
the main roads from the west and east of the outer layer connect lengthed to two other cities. Whereas16km To the southwest is Brandson with 15,000 residents, Cransdon is located 25km far from the southeast with 29,000 people.Submitted by memari.pedram on
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