The two pie charts illustrate why British do migration to and from during a question period.

The pie charts provide information about reasons for British people to move from one place to another or from one country to another country.

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The two pie charts illustrate why British do migration to and from during a question period.

Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree

People always believe that we could be a better person by using positive mindset. To what extend do you agree?

Write an essay from the perspective of a lost or forgotten toy that has been discarded and left behind by a beloved owner. Explore the emotions that come with the sense of abandonment and the longing to be found again

Many people think that increasing business and cultural contacts between countries is a positive development. However, others believe that these are leading to the loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.