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The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 ann 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 ann 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart Illustrates four types of
rentals
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 and
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sales’
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 rates which were
rentals
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,
VHS
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sales
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,
DVD
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sales
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 and Blu-ray
sales
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 from a certain film store annually between 2002 and 2011. In 2002, among all categories,
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 topped the charts at 185,000, followed by
VHS
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 and
DVD
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sales
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 at 85,000 and 48,000 respectively. The number of
rentals
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 decreased gradually from 185,000 to 58,000 from 2002 to 2011.
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, the
VHS
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sales
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 rate dropped from 85,000 to the bottom of the chart
in
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 a stable pace from 2002 to 2006.
In contrast
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, the figures
of
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for
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DVD
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sales
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 boosted up and
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 the peak of the chart at 215,000 in 2007,
then
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 dropped to 180,000 in 2011.
In addition
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, Blu-ray
films
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 popped out in 2007 and their
sales
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 rate went up to 12,000 which is the smallest proportion in 2011.
Overall
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,
rentals
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 and
VHS
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sales
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 showed a downward trend
whereas
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DVD
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films
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 went upward and started being the best-selling in 2004.
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, after 2006, no one brought any
VHS
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films
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 from the store.
However
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, Blu-ray
films
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 came out in 2007 and demonstrated a tenfold increase in 2011.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rentals, vhs, sales, dvd, films with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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