The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultureal land become less productive. The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The given pie chart indicates some reasons for
land
degradation around the world while
the area was degraded by three continents during
ten years from 1990 to 1999. Change preposition
over
Overall
, one hand, it can be seen that over-grazing and deforestation
accounted for two thirds
of Add a hyphen
two-thirds
land
degradation. On the other hand
, in Northnorth
America, Europe and Oceania, Correct your spelling
North North
over-cultivation
, deforestation
and Over-grazing were the most effective causes of land
disintegration during a decade.
In the pie chart, 35% of land
depreciation belonged to over-grazing and it followed
by Add a missing verb
was followed
deforestation
and over-cultivation
with less than a third and 28% respectively. Moreover
, only other reasons with 7% caused to degrade
Replace the word
degradation
the
Change preposition
of the
land
.
In North America, over-cultivation
with 33% was the most effective cause to degrade
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of degrading
land
; however
, deforestation
had the lowest proportion with almost nil (0.2%). In Europe, though deforestation
experienced the the
highest percentage of Remove the redundancy
apply
land
decline with 9.8 % , over-grazing decreased by almost half (5.5 %). Nevertheless
, in Oceania, over-grazing took place roughly ten times more than deforestation
. In addition
, although
over-cultivation
never occurred in Oceania, North America and Europe saw it with 7.7% and 3.3% respectively.Submitted by Ehsanmurcielego on
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