The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultureal land become less productive. The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultureal land become less productive. The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The given pie chart indicates some reasons for
land
degradation around the world
while
the area was degraded by three continents
during
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ten years from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
, one hand, it can be seen that over-grazing and
deforestation
accounted for
two thirds
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of
land
degradation.
On the other hand
, in
Northnorth
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North North
America, Europe and Oceania,
over-cultivation
,
deforestation
and Over-grazing were the most effective causes of
land
disintegration during a decade. In the pie chart, 35% of
land
depreciation belonged to over-grazing and it
followed
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by
deforestation
and
over-cultivation
with less than a third and 28% respectively.
Moreover
, only other reasons with 7% caused to
degrade
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the
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land
. In North America,
over-cultivation
with 33% was the most effective cause
to degrade
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land
;
however
,
deforestation
had the lowest proportion with almost nil (0.2%). In Europe, though
deforestation
experienced the
the
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highest percentage of
land
decline with 9.8 % , over-grazing decreased by almost half (5.5 %).
Nevertheless
, in Oceania, over-grazing took place roughly ten times more than
deforestation
.
In addition
,
although
over-cultivation
never occurred in Oceania, North America and Europe saw it with 7.7% and 3.3% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, deforestation, over-cultivation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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