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The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features andake comparison where relevant

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features andake comparison where relevant
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The given pictures illustrate what Anthropology degree holders from a certain university did after completing their undergraduate degree and their salaries after five years of
work
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 in three types of employment.
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, it can clearly be seen that the destination with the highest proportion is full-time
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 and the majority of the graduates who
work
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 in the government sector receive the highest salary. In terms of after-college life, more than half of the graduates chose to have full-time
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 and those who chose to get part-time
work
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 are at precisely 15%.
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, those who remain unemployed are 3% lower than those who do part-time
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.
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, full-time postgrad study and not known both contributed at 8% whilst those who do part-time
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 and postgrad study at the same time are only 3% lower. Regarding the salaries, 80% of freelance consultants receive more than $75.000 compared to 70% of those working in the government sector and only 55% in private companies.
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only around 20% of those who
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 as freelance consultants and in the government sector receive less than $50.000,
while
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 those who
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 in private companies are 25% higher.
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