the chart below show the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.

the chart below show the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. summarize the information and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
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This
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provided bar chart illustrates the observation of a survey that was carried out in five Australian cities in the
last
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four weeks, the purpose of the survey was to check the drinking habits of people for
coffee
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and tea and the rate of buying them.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there were three ways for folks to get drinks
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as buying fresh
coffee
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, instant
coffee
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, or going to a café for
coffee
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or tea.
To begin
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, the percentage of the population who preferred to visit a café to drink tea or
coffee
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was the highest one compared to the other two methods of drinking,
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, it was nearly equal in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, at about 62%, but the
ratio
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in Brisbane, at 55% which was slightly greater than, in Adelaide, at around 49%. Regarding inhabitants who bought fresh
coffee
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, their proportions were the least in comparison to others,
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; Sydney accounted for the biggest percentage about 48%,
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the lowest
ratio
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was around 39% in Brisbane, which was the same as, in Adelaide.
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, buying instant
coffee
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represented the second highest percentage, and it was the highest
ratio
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in Hobart, at about 49%, but it was the lowest
ratio
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in Sydney, at 45%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, ratio with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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