The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provided information regarding the changes in the floor plan of a public
library
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. It discussed the difference between the course of two decades and the present.
Overall
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, the size of the public
library
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in square meters does not seem to have any adjustment.
However
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, the measurement of the
rooms
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can be noticed to have changed with regard to their size. The tables and chairs located in the hallway were removed in the present interior of the public
library
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. The designation for each room was completely transformed for other purposes. In detail, the entrance location remained in its place twenty years ago. In the present time, the reading area and inquiry desk were replaced by a computer room and café. The adult non-fiction
books
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that were previously noted to be in the centre of the
rooms
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on the right side were now replaced by the information desk, adult fiction
books
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and self-service machines. Meanwhile, all reference
books
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can now be found on the adjacent side of the floor plan. The
last
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two
rooms
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were
also
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converted to children’s fiction
books
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and storytelling events and the other side is the lecture room.
To sum up
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, all
rooms
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are now offering completely different services
although
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there is a minimal renovation of the architecture of the public
library
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.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, rooms, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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