The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provided information regarding the changes in the floor plan of a public
library
. It discussed the difference between the course of two decades and the present.
Overall
, the size of the public library
in square meters does not seem to have any adjustment. However
, the measurement of the rooms
can be noticed to have changed with regard to their size. The tables and chairs located in the hallway were removed in the present interior of the public library
. The designation for each room was completely transformed for other purposes.
In detail, the entrance location remained in its place twenty years ago. In the present time, the reading area and inquiry desk were replaced by a computer room and café. The adult non-fiction books
that were previously noted to be in the centre of the rooms
on the right side were now replaced by the information desk, adult fiction books
and self-service machines. Meanwhile, all reference books
can now be found on the adjacent side of the floor plan. The last
two rooms
were also
converted to children’s fiction books
and storytelling events and the other side is the lecture room.
To sum up
, all rooms
are now offering completely different services although
there is a minimal renovation of the architecture of the public library
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, rooms, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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