The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provided information regarding the changes in the floor plan of a public
library
. It discussed the difference between the course of two decades and the present.
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Overall
, the size of the public Linking Words
library
in square meters does not seem to have any adjustment. Use synonyms
However
, the measurement of the Linking Words
rooms
can be noticed to have changed with regard to their size. The tables and chairs located in the hallway were removed in the present interior of the public Use synonyms
library
. The designation for each room was completely transformed for other purposes.
In detail, the entrance location remained in its place twenty years ago. In the present time, the reading area and inquiry desk were replaced by a computer room and café. The adult non-fiction Use synonyms
books
that were previously noted to be in the centre of the Use synonyms
rooms
on the right side were now replaced by the information desk, adult fiction Use synonyms
books
and self-service machines. Meanwhile, all reference Use synonyms
books
can now be found on the adjacent side of the floor plan. The Use synonyms
last
two Linking Words
rooms
were Use synonyms
also
converted to children’s fiction Linking Words
books
and storytelling events and the other side is the lecture room.
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To sum up
, all Linking Words
rooms
are now offering completely different services Use synonyms
although
there is a minimal renovation of the architecture of the public Linking Words
library
.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, rooms, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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