The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features andake comparison where relevant

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features andake comparison where relevant
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The given chart and table illustrate the combination of information regarding the employment status of anthropology students after graduation, and the amount of payment for their work after graduating from university 5 years later, broken down into three types of employment.
Overall
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, being a full-time employee is the largest number of people
while
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the smallest proportion was part-time workers and
also
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studying for a higher education.
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, there were 3 types of employment, including freelance consultants, government sector and private companies, and working in the government sector earned the most income. At first
glance
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it is clear that
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the highest proportion of graduates was working full-time accounting for 52%, and the second highest was provided by part-time work at 15%. The next highest were unemployed at around 12% and the rest of
jobs
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were under 10%. Moving on to their salaries, 80% of the freelance consultants and the government employees earned at least $75,000,
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, 25% and 30% of the private companies’ workers were making a minimum of $75,000 and $100,000, respectively.
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