The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
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Information about the production of electricity by geothermal energy is illustrated by a diagram.
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, there are five main steps in the method, which
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cold
water
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and natural resources to produce energy.
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gets pumped four and a half
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below ground to an injection well. From there the liquid travels through the geothermal zone,
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there
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the name geothermal energy, which consists of
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stones. After that, the now hot
water
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goes to a production well, from where it gets pumped above ground to a condenser. The steam created in the condenser from the
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water
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powers a turbine, from which a generator gets power and produces electricity.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • generate electricity
  • diagram
  • volcano
  • magma reservoirs
  • deep underground
  • heat
  • steam
  • geothermal plant
  • turbine
  • condensed
  • pumped back
  • underground reservoirs
  • transmitted
  • power grid
  • distribution
  • continuous
  • renewable
  • volcanic activity
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