The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates estimated
rates
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of world
illiteracy
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based on gender in comparison with developed
countries
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and various
regions
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worldwide for the past year.
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, it can be clearly seen that
illiteracy
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rates
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are consistently higher for females around the world. The trend is prominent primarily in South
Asia
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, Arab States, and Sub-Saharan Africa. For males,
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is
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true. As expected,
illiteracy
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is least prominent in developed
countries
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. For women,
illiteracy
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accends to extremely high
rates
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in South
Asia
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, the Arab States, and Sub-Saharan Africa, with approximate numbers of 55, 52, and 47 per cent, respectively. East
Asia
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and Oceania share the percentage of 20
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and are followed by Latin American and Caribbean
regions
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with 12%. In developed
countries
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the number is astoundingly low, being only 2%. Men,
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, demonstrate much smaller proportions.
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, ratings of
illiteracy
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throughout the
regions
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remain indifferent, so the previous three regional leaders have 34%, 29%, and 31%. And
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, these
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are going after East
Asia
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and Oceania with 8%. Latin American and Caribbean
regions
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' male proportions are not too different from female ones, with exactly 10%. 1% of
illiteracy
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can be seen in developed
countries
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rates, illiteracy, countries, regions, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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