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The digram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summaries the information bybselecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The figure illustrates the recycling of
plastic
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bottles
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.
This
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 writing describes how
plastic
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bottles
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 are made.
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, it can be seen that the process by which
plastic
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bottles
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 are recycled is a multi-step cyclic process, which consists of five main stages
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 as collection, sorting, compression & and crushing, heating pellets, and purchasing . In the first
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, inhabitants place used
bottles
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 in collection bins
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 these
bottles
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 are collected by large trucks. In the next
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, these
bottles
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 are taken to a recycling centre plant where they are separated on the basis of different sorts of sizes.
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 they are compressed
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 out pressure and break into small blocks. After that, the pieces are again ground into small portions, together and washed with water. In a later
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,
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 small portion of
plastic
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 is poured into
molded
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 pellets.
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plastic
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 pellets are heated to form raw materials. In the
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stage
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, new raw products are made and packed for distribution to the shopping centre, where the consumers purchase them. After that, the process of
plastic
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 glass begins again.
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