You find a bag somewhere. The owner address and name were there on the bag. Write a letter to the owner. Inform where you found the bag. Write about the contents of the bag. Hoe he/she can collect it.

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Dear Sir, My name is Kulwinder Kaur and I live in Toronto near Scarborough Town Centre. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the bag I found

last

night at the grocery store. Which contains your name and contact details on it.

Last

night, when I went out to get some groceries from FreshCo with my friend suddenly we noticed a Puma black colour briefcase with white stripes on it.

Firstly

, I avoided checking but it looks like it has some valuable stuff in it so that’s why we grabbed it. In

this

handbag, there was a Macbook from Apple and a digital watch with a charger. The most important thing your wallet, which contains your debit and credit cards

as well as

there was some amount of cash.It

also

has one notebook containing information about different contacts and E-mail addresses. Other than that there were some gym clothes and a water bottle. I know

this

bag is really important for you. You can collect anytime between Saturday to Sunday from my address 34 Wisdom Drive, Scarborough, Ontario, M1J4K7. My contact number is +1 647 615 1823, you can

also

call me on

this

no before half an hour reaching my place. Waiting for you to collect your bag as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely Kulwinder Kaur

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

219 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You find a bag somewhere. The owner address and name were there on the bag. Write a letter to the owner. Inform where you found the bag. Write about the contents of the bag. Hoe he/she can collect it.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many businesses choose to recruit from within their own country rather than sourcing staff from overseas.what are the advantages or disadvantages of this trend?

Some people thinks that governments should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree.

Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

FAnny is a agreat musician back to 1800s. What do you knoe from her and extend your ideas when reading her life