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The arach below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four tween 1990 and 2007.

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The chart given illustrates the
emissions
 of
acid
rain
 in the United Kingdom from 1990 to 2007. Units are measured in millions of
tonnes
. It can be seen that the
acid
rain
emissions
 in Electricity, Gas and Water Supply was the highest in 1990, with 3.3
million
tonnes
, and
then
 it dropped dramatically to 0.5
million
tonnes
 in 2007.
While the
Correct word choice
The
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acid
rain
emissions
 in Transport and Communication fluctuated slightly (0.7
million
tonnes
) between 1990 and 2007, and
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
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 surpassed the
acid
rain
emissions
 in Electricity, Gas and Water Supply in 2003, about 0.9
million
tonnes
. The
acid
rain
emissions
 in Other industries decreased slightly from 1990 to 2007, from 2.1
million
tonnes
 to 1.2
million
tonnes
. There is a moderate decrease in the
acid
rain
emissions
 in Domestic as well during these years, from 0.6
million
tonnes
 to 0.2
million
tonnes
.
Overall
, the UK
acid
rain
emissions
 show a reducing trend generally between 1990 and 2007.
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