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Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organisation. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years,there has been a noticeable trend in starting a
business
. The reason is
independence
 and flexibility, suitable for the amount of people who seek novelty and self-command at work. And it is
also
 the
independence
 that brings a lot of challenges. From my point of view, the disadvantages of owning a
business
 do outweigh the advantages. Admittedly, starting a
business
 has some benefits. The first advantage is flexibility,
business
 owners have
authority
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the authority
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 to choose products, services and prices and the most important is to decide the working schedule
which
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that
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 is suitable for
self
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them
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. The second advantage is financial
independence
, the owners can earn more money because
business
 owners do not depend on the managers and are fully in charge of finances.
However
, I believe that working for an organisation would bring entrepreneurs more detriment. Typically it is difficult to maintain and expand
due to
lack
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a lack
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 of partners, partners and money are the two most important factors for starting a
business
, it determines 90
percent
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per cent
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 of
business
 growth.
Not to mention
 lack of resources and experience, two factors are important only after partners and money. Lack of experience will cause businesses to face many difficulties and easily fail. In summary,
while
 starting a
business
 is
independence
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independent
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 and
flexibility
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flexible
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, it still has a lot of challenges and risks. So, to start a
business
 is not easy, carefully in all of the choices dedication is indispensable.
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