In some countries, students pay their college and university fees, while in some others, the government pays for them. Do you think the advantages the government pays the money outweigh the disadvantages?

Education

plays an important role in everyone’s life. In some places, the

fees

of college and university are paid by the

government

.

While

in some

other

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others

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,

student

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students

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have to pay their own

fees

.

Although

it has numerous benefits as

fees

are paid by the

government

, its

drawback

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drawbacks

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or negative consequences cannot be overlooked. In the forthcoming article, I shall elucidate my stance on

this

matter before reaching a final verdict.

To begin

with, there are several advantages of paying

fees

by the

government

. First of all, it

create

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equal opportunities for

every one

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and it promotes equality among individuals.

Moreover

, there is no burden for children

of collecting

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their

fees

on time and they concentrate better on their studies.

In addition

, parents of poor children are unable to afford their

fees

of

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for

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higher

education

so it is

best

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opportunity for

the

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poor individuals.

Thus

, if the

government

paid

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the

fees

of

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students

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they can perform better in their studies.

Nevertheless

, there are some negative effects of paying

fees

by the

government

. On

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top of that, students do not take

studies

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their studies

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seriously

due to

the reason that

government

pay

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their

fees

.

Furthermore

, more and more individuals go to the college

then

it

get

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overcrowded and it

create

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difficulties for the teachers to handle the whole class and

also

it

reduce

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the attention of the teachers from the

student

as they

donot

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do not

focus all the students equally.

Additionally

, university

education

is very costly and if the

government

paid the

fees

of everyone,

then

the

government

donot

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give much attention to

other sector

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another sector

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like healthcare

and

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transportation and so on.

Therefore

, these are the disadvantages if

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free

education

is given to all the students.

To conclude

, having discussed the topic at length, I believe that

disadvantages

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outweigh the advantages. In my contention, the

government

should pay college

fee

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fees

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only

those

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to those

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student

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students

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who are not able to afford their

fees

, and those who are intelligent

they

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have to

provide

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scholarships.