You have just returned from a holiday. You are unhappy with the quality of the hotel you stayed in and want to complain to the travel agency that arranged the holiday. Write a letter to the manager of the travel agency. In your letter, say about the holiday and where you stayed mention why you are unhappy about the hotel where you stayed say what you would like the travel agency to do
Dear sir
I am Vy and your customer at your hotel. I would like to give some feedback about your hotel's services.
Firstly
, I would like to thank your company for creating a good time for my family. Secondly
, kindly follow some points below.
Last
week, we had a summer vacation in Da Nang City and rented your homestay within
5 days for 4 nights. We really enjoyed and had fun together at the homestay, Change preposition
for
along with
the beach, It is easy to go somewhere because it is located in the center of Da Nang.
However
, I would like to give some feedback to improve your services and lead to increased customer experiences. Firstly
, The room had trouble with the air conditioning, I would say it was old. I think you can replace that one. Secondly
, The bathroom had a problem with the hot water electricity, which led to not having warm water to take a shower.
I would like to make some points to help improve your services. I hope you can consider some of the points that I mentioned above.
If you have any further
information, feel free to ask me any questions.
Thanks and best regards
Vy nguyen
Change the capitalization
Nguyen
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
