The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.
The multi-line graph illustrates data regarding cell phones expended
among
every month Change preposition
apply
from
a European nation from Jan to September. Generally speaking, Change preposition
in
it is clear that
the overall
amount of money about telephones has dramatically increased in the considered time period, albeit with specific trends for each country.
First off, in January Alpha was less in a state, while
more increasingly numerous in other types of cell phones. After that, until June
this
money spent remained roughly
5 Change preposition
at roughly
euros
. Similarly
, Lex had a slowly
rise in Change the word
slow
this
same period, which held
likely 12 Verb problem
was
euros
. However
, the Alpha faced a steep and constant climb in the number of costs, skyrocketing from 5 euros
to 25 euros
between June
and September. ,Similarly
the standard cost of agreement regarding the Lex Add a comma
,Similarly
creep
up 13 Wrong verb form
crept
euros
to roughly 18 euros
in the four months.
On the other hand
, the Domo and the Sim TX faced moderate growth in the rate of monthly contract
before Fix the agreement mistake
contracts
June
, which reaching
20 Wrong verb form
reached
euros
and approximately 15 euros
. Finally
, the number of the Domo in June
and the Aipha in September both had the highest, which the
same 25 Add a missing verb
was the
euros
.Submitted by cyh000823 on
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