The charts below show the percentages of male and female students getting top grades in 1960 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the proportions of students from both genders that excelled in five subjects over the period
of
1960 and 2000. Change preposition
between
Overall
, Males
were better at Science
, Math
and Humanities
, while
females
obtained higher grades in Arts
and Languages
.
To begin
with, in 1960, males
surpassed females
in Science
and Math
with nearly 33% and 30% of male students that scored high grades compared to 10% and 4% of the females
. In contrast
, Females
excelled in Arts
, Languages
and Humanities
with nearly 30%, 45% and 32% scored
excellent grades respectively. Wrong verb form
scoring
While
the percentage of males
that got good scores in those subjects were
9% in Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Arts
, 21% in Languages
and 23% in Humanities
.
On the other hand
, in 2000, there was a slight decrease in the percentage of males
that excelled in Science
, by 10% and by 12% in Math
, despite that, males
remained in the lead. There was a small increase in Arts
to about (21%),
and a significant increase in Remove the comma
apply
Humanities
to 42%. As for the females
, the proportion that obtained top degrees in Science
and Math
remained nearly the same. There was a slight decrease in by 5 % in Arts
and by 10% in Languages
and Humanities
.Submitted by islam_biologist on
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