The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
The data provided in the form of a table illustrates how many students were enrolled in four secondary school types from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, at the beginning of the surveyed
period
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the Voluntary-controlled
Schools
were the most popular
schools
,
however
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Community
Schools
were liked by more students in 2009.
Also
, there was a downward trend in the number of pupils attending all types of
schools
, except Community
Schools
, in which the tendency of people to study there increased significantly. From 2000 to 2009, Grammar
Schools
and Voluntary-controlled
Schools
experienced a substantial decrease in enrollment of children and reached nearly half of its number in 9 years at 12% and 20%, respectively.
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