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Some peole think that parents shuold teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however,believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#peole #parents #shuold #children #members #society #school #place
It is undoubtedly true that all
parents
 want their
children
 to become good citizens and there's a wide belief that
parents
 should teach and
instill
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 good behaviour in their
children
 . On the
controrary
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contrary
, some people opine that school is the perfect
plce
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place
 to learn good manners . In many
perception
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.
i
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 firmly believe that
parents
 are more responsible. On the one hand , the bond between
parents
 and their
children
 is unique that nurtures holistic growth and
developement
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development
.
Parents
 are the primary teachers and home is the first school
foer
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for
 the
children
 where they are gullible
ans
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and
 under the sole custody of
parents
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their parents
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 , so they imitate their
parents
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parent's
parents'
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 behaviour and imbibe their qualities into them in almost all aspects of their early life-
hence
,
parents
 have an
undenible
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undeniable
 role in teaching concepts of good and evil and moral values to their
children
.
On the other hand
, a group
people
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of people
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 vanememtely argue that schools
shuld
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should
 take responsibility for teaching and inculcating good qualities like
cosisitency
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consistency
, etc as the
children
 spend most of their time in school.
In addition
 , teachers have a significant influence
of
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on
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children
. They play an equally essential role in moulding the
charecter
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character
 lessons, teachers can
instill
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instil
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 moral and ethical values in
children
 that would help the
children
 in their future lives.
To sum up
,
i'd
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 conclude
thar
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that
 entities have their unique impact on
children
. But schools cannot replace the role and responsibility of
parents
 in making a child become a responsible person as schools deal with a vast number of
children
 and the mindset of every child
vareis
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varies
.
Also
,
children
 are more attached to their
parents
, so their behaviour reflects their
parents
.
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