The table shows data about the underground railway systems in six major cities with the date opened, kilometers of the route, and passenger numbers per year in millions.
The table chart illustrates
date
of the Correct article usage
the date
undergraound
railway systems in Correct your spelling
underground
London
, Paris
, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto
and Las Angeles
with the number
of opened, kilometers
of the Change the spelling
kilometres
route
, the
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and the
number
of passenger year in millions.
Overall
, London
was fist
opened and Correct your spelling
first
then
Los
Angeles
was opened lastly
. The number
of Kilometres of route
can be seen Add an article
the route
a route
paris
is most Change the capitalization
Paris
highly
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high
while
Kyoto
is very lowest than other
five countries. Correct article usage
the other
Also
, the amount of Passengers per year are Paris
and Tokyo significant
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significantly
highly
compared to Rephrase
apply
Kyoto
and Los
Angeles
which are very lowest
.
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low
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The Railyway
Railyway
system was started Correct your spelling
Railway
firtly
from Correct your spelling
first
London
in 1863 while
Los
Angeles
was opened very lately
, in 2001. Change the word
late
London
, the kilometres of route
are very high 294 and the lowest the Add an article
the route
number
of kilometres of route
is Add an article
the route
Kyoto
, just 11.
Passengers who use the railway, significant
highest country is Tokyo (1927 Add an article
the significant
million
) and the second highest country is Paris
, which is 1191 million
. But, Kyoto
is lowest
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the lowest
condsiderly
about 45 Correct your spelling
considering
million
, and then
Los
Angeles
is a little high
than Correct word choice
higher
Kyoto
which is 50million
.Correct your spelling
50 million
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