The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of public
transport
use
rate by six different
age
groups
and two locations in one country in 2016. The two places were large cities and others. It is worth noticing that, the percentage of public
transport
use
rates
of large city
residents
at all
age
groups
were all higher than other
residents
, except
people
who were 61 to 75
years
old. For the large city
residents
, among all
age
groups
, 31-45
years
old topped the graph. There were
almost
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70% of
people
who were 31-45
years
old used public transportation
whereas
the
use
rate of
people
who were 61-75 and more than 76
years
old at 10% and 15% respectively.
Besides
, the percentage of 0-15, 16-30, and 40-60 year-old
people
was all around 40% to 55%.
Although
most of the public
transport
use
rates
of other
residents
were approximately 15% at all
age
groups
, about 26% of 16-30-year-old
residents
and 8% of those who were more than 76
years
old used public
transport
in 2016.
Overall
, the proportion of public
transport
use
rates
of large city
residents
fluctuated in 2016.
In contrast
, the
use
rates
of other
residents
remained roughly at all
age
groups
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, use, age, groups, rates, residents, people, years with synonyms.
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