every year several languages die out .some people think that this is not important because life will easier if there are fewer languages in the world. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Lots of
languages
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becoming extinct every year.
some
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people have an opinion that
this
is good as life will become easy if there are few
langauages
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languages
spoken
inthe
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in the
world.
This
essay totally
disagree
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disagrees
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with the statement and
present
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presents
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why language extinction is
serious
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concern for human civilisation. If
languages
becoming
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become
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extinct we will
loose
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lots of knowledge and cultural
heritage
. IF
langauges
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languages
language
keep becoming extinct our generation will be deprived of
rich
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the rich
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cultural
heritage
maintained by diverse
langauges
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languages
. our children will not
be understood
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diverse
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the diverse
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heritage
of different tribes.
For example
,Maori
cultural
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is still alive because
of
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maori
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Maori
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langauage
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language
is widely spoken and
parctice
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practised
in
newzealand
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Newzealand
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. I
beleieve
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believe
that
culture
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heritage
is only
mainatined
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maintained
by preserving
langauages
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languages
.
Furthermore
,
Languages
contain stories of
culture
,
lots
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and lots
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of
knowwledge
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knowledge
is passed on to
next
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the next
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generation in the form of verbal stories . If
languages
becoming
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become
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extinct that knowledge will be lost out.To cite an example most of
history
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the history
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of
red
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indian
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Indian
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is maintained in
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the cree
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cree
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language.
because
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of
that
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,that
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we are able to understand redindina
culture
. In conclusion, I
am totally disagree
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totally disagree
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with
statement
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the statement
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loosing
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losing
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of
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apply
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langauges
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languages
language
is good for humans or easier for humans. We will
loose
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lose
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culture
,
heritage
and knowledge of various
civilisation
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civilisations
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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