every year several languages die out .some people think that this is not important because life will easier if there are fewer languages in the world. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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contain stories of

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Linguistic diversity
Cultural heritage
Language extinction
Communication barrier
Linguistic imperialism
Endangered languages
Language revitalization
Monolingual
Multilingual
Language preservation
Homogenization
Language policy
Cultural assimilation
Intangible heritage
Indigenous languages
Globalization
Dialects
Localization
Language documentation
Digital archiving

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