At an event you attended recently, you met an employee of a company you would like to work at. You talked to her and she suggested that you should contact her if you needed any help with your job application. Write a letter to this employee. In your letter: 1. remind her how you met and ask for some help 2. tell her what kind of job you are interested in 3. ask her about the company's job application process

Dear Ms. Brown, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I'
m
writing
this
letter to inform you that I would like
to
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help me
how
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to join
in
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your company.
Firstly
, I
have
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met each other
on
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the
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last
Friday at
an
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Cookie Foodie Lover event. As I told you, my name is Ramita. I'
m
a pastry chef. I'
m
good at baking all of
bakery
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.
Moreover
, I need your
helping
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to
apply
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the
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job in your company. As you know, I'
m
a pastry chef. So, I'
m
interested in
the
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career that
about
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baking bakery.
In addition
, I have
an
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experience
about
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of
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being
pastry
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chef in a Dusit
Thanit
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Thani
Hotel
about
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2 years and 3
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.
However
, I would like to know the company's job application process. Could you describe the
neccessary
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necessary
information and write it back
on
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my email? My email is [email protected].
Also
, you can contact me on my number phones. My number is 0809025178. Please let me know if you can
helping
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me and I hope you
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letter
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back.
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sincerely, Ramita Panprayoon
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