At an event you attended recently, you met an employee of a company you would like to work at. You talked to her and she suggested that you should contact her if you needed any help with your job application. Write a letter to this employee. In your letter: 1. remind her how you met and ask for some help 2. tell her what kind of job you are interested in 3. ask her about the company's job application process
Dear Ms. Brown,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I'm
writing this
letter to inform you that I would like to
help me Correct pronoun usage
you to
how
to join Change preposition
with how
in
your company.
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apply
Firstly
, I have
met each other Unnecessary verb
apply
on
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apply
the
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apply
last
Friday at an
Cookie Foodie Lover event. As I told you, my name is Ramita. I'Change the article
a
m
a pastry chef. I'm
good at baking all of bakery
. Add an article
the bakery
Moreover
, I need your helping
to Change the form of the verb
help
apply
Add the preposition
forapply
the
job in your company.
As you know, I'Correct article usage
a
m
a pastry chef. So, I'm
interested in the
career that Correct article usage
a
about
baking bakery. Add a missing verb
is about
In addition
, I have an
experience Correct article usage
apply
about
being Change preposition
of
pastry
chef in a Dusit Add an article
a pastry
Thanit
Hotel Correct your spelling
Thani
about
2 years and 3 Change preposition
for about
month
.
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months
However
, I would like to know the company's job application process. Could you describe the neccessary
information and write it back Correct your spelling
necessary
on
my email? My email is [email protected]. Change preposition
in
Also
, you can contact me on my number phones. My number is 0809025178.
Please let me know if you can helping
me and I hope you Change the form of the verb
help
sending
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send
letter
back.
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a letter
Your
sincerely,
Ramita PanprayoonCorrect the word
Yours
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