Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to local council. In your letter Give details how you and your friends or family use the centre Explain why the sport and leisure centre is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Dear Sir or Madam, After greetings, I am writing

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letter to you with regard to the latest news about closing the sports and leisure

centre

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. I would like you to be informed that

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all the

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whole

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apply

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residents

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the city are concerned about

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for several reasons.

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, I would like to clarify that we use

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centre

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for family

gathering

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and

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meetings,

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, some would enjoy their time watching their children practice physical activities there

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therefore

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we immensely need

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centre

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to

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here.

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,

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place gives us a sense of community that we belong to

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city,

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, the local charity groups use

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centre

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for some events

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as; collecting donations and delivering these to those in need,

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, if you take

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a decision, it would affect us badly. Closing

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centre

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would be a disaster for both

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older

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minors

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residents, and

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of

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children will lose the place where they practice sports

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they would spend their leisure time playing phone games which are unfavourable to their health. I hope that you will withdraw

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decision for the welfare of public benefits. Yours

sincerley

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sincerely

, John Adam