Some people believe these days teenagers are spending their leisure time at shopping centers instead of doing organized activities as sports or music . Do you think it has a negative or positive development?

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is developed, more and more

person

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people

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who

think

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they deserve to get more

benefit

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benefits

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like

spend

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spending

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freetime

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free time

to go

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going

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to shopping

centers

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centres

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. In

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essay,

i

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will

disscuss

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discuss

about pros and cons

for

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this

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problem.

Firstly

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, shopping

centers

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centres

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and

supermarket

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supermarkets

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are places

that

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where

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people can use their

money

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to buy goods,

it

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which

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also

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bring

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to

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apply

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them better

feeling

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feelings

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like

reduce

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reducing

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stress.

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, it is

method

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that

help

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develop

economic

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the economic

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background

for

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of

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country

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the country

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. Teenagers will spend their

time

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for

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apply

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shopping

instead

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of doing organized activities like

sport

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sports

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or music, it just might they

dont

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do not

want to do them.

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the other hand, go to shopping can

be make

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be made

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hamful

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harmful

for teenagers when they have

not

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tonot

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earn

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earned

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money

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,

that

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which

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mean

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their

money

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almost come from their parent.

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is

negative

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point because young person

can

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are

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not aware

that

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of

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difficult

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how difficult

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to earn

their

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apply

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money

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have yet

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apply

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.

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, if they

spent

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spend

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too much

of

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apply

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time

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to go

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going

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to

shopping

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the shopping

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center

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centre

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, they will skip many works have to finish.

That is

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a big problem. In conclusion, young people

spend

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spending

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their leisure

time

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at shopping

centers

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centres

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have

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both positive and negative. Positive things will be more when they know how to use

money

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and manage

time

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