Do Children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded?

Nowadays, a wide range of

children

have

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different

behaviors

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, either in bad  or good ways.

Additionally

, it's better to reward them if they achieve something than to punish them merely for doing the wrong thing. Personally, I think

children

behave better when they are rewarded. I feel that way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin

with, many

children

are perceived as doing exercises in class or studying an extra course.

However

, it looks hard for the

children

, so

instead

of that, their parents decide to give them a physical punishment every time they do not complete any task they ought to finish.

For instance

, since

last

June, my cousin has not organized his room and has kept it in total chaos, as long as his mother gives him a physical punishment

such

as doing 25 push-ups five times.

As a consequence

, some

children

in different countries are very mindful and smart

for

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doing their tasks; they deserve as much as high performers are rewarded.

For example

, most primary and middle schools in China reward their students for achieving good scores in education or sports competitions.

To Conclude

, the prospect of giving

children

physical punishment is great if they do not concentrate on their

study

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or training;

on the other hand

, we

also

need to reward them if they achieve a good score in school or win a competition.