Recently you saw an article in a a newspaper about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In this letter, you should tell: * How you know about this city/town * What information was incorrect * What the editor should do about this

Dear Sir, My name is Kulwinder Kaur reside near Scarborough Town Centre. I am a regular reader of your newspaper and its unique articles. I am writing
this
letter to express my deep concern regarding the incorrect Information published in the paper. I read the newspaper and encountered that an article published in the History section regarding our famous building built in 1989 contained some incorrect data. It was mentioned in the newspaper that the Rock Building was built by a famous architect John Smith but the fact is, it was built and maintained by a popular writer Mr. Kabir Shah.
Also
, some of the data related to the structure of the building is
also
misleading
such
as room count and shape of the building.
However
, It would be really commendable if you could rectify the mistakes and republish the article. So that correct information can reach their potential readers. Looking forward to a quick action. Yours sincerely, Kulwinderr Kaur
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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