It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

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that
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whether
the
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college
students
should stay away from home rather than
to
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live with their
parents
. I oppose
this
statement because it would be difficult for
students
to manage things all by themselves and not economical. In
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I will outline
about
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my opposition to
this
statement.
Students
have to go through a lot of academic work throughout their studies. So most of their
time
has to be spent on their academic assignments, and their group research projects, But If
students
stay away from their
parents
, It would be difficult for them to handle the household activities
such
as cooking and maintaining hygiene. All these activities consume considerable
time
to get
it
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done, which in fact,
nearly
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impossible
to
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the
students
.
For example
, My friend started living away from their
parents
because of
her
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personal reasons,
found
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and found
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very
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difficult to manage all the things by herself.
As a result
, she saw a negative impact on her studies.
In addition
to that, living away from family costs something,
Firstly
, Living expenses are way high
due to
the rising inflation and recession.
Secondly
, House rents are too expensive nowadays.
Finally
, Cooking is another challenge. In
such
circumstances, in order to deal with their monthly expenses,
students
have to look for
part
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time
jobs which would financially support them. Having said that, it is another struggle
that is
added up. All these factors
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not strengthen them in achieving success in academics, In fact,
students
neither get some peaceful free
time
nor good academic scores.
To sum up
, Being a student, It is worthwhile to live with
parents
in order to achieve success in studies.
Because it
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would be very challenging if a student lives away from their
parents
as it involves a lot of essential activities that need to be managed.
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