It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
It is highly debatable
that
whether Correct word choice
apply
the
college Correct article usage
apply
students
should stay away from home rather than to
live with their Fix the infinitive
apply
parents
. I oppose this
statement because it would be difficult for students
to manage things all by themselves and not economical. In this
essay
I will outline Add a comma
,essay
about
my opposition to Change preposition
apply
this
statement.
Students
have to go through a lot of academic work throughout their studies. So most of their time
has to be spent on their academic assignments, and their group research projects, But If students
stay away from their parents
, It would be difficult for them to handle the household activities such
as cooking and maintaining hygiene. All these activities consume considerable time
to get it
done, which in fact, Correct pronoun usage
apply
nearly
impossible Add a missing verb
is nearly
to
the Change preposition
for
students
. For example
, My friend started living away from their parents
because of her
personal reasons, Correct pronoun usage
apply
found
Correct word choice
and found
very
difficult to manage all the things by herself. Correct pronoun usage
it very
As a result
, she saw a negative impact on her studies.
In addition
to that, living away from family costs something, Firstly
, Living expenses are way high due to
the rising inflation and recession. Secondly
, House rents are too expensive nowadays. Finally
, Cooking is another challenge. In such
circumstances, in order to deal with their monthly expenses, students
have to look for part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
jobs which would financially support them. Having said that, it is another struggle that is
added up. All these factors does
not strengthen them in achieving success in academics, In fact, Change the verb form
do
students
neither get some peaceful free time
nor good academic scores.
To sum up
, Being a student, It is worthwhile to live with parents
in order to achieve success in studies. Because it
would be very challenging if a student lives away from their Correct word choice
It
parents
as it involves a lot of essential activities that need to be managed.Submitted by hussainshariff.md1 on
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