You recently made a journey by train. When you got on the train, you realised you had left a bag on the platform. Write a letter to the station manager. In your letter •give details of where and when you left the bag •describe the bag and its contents •suggest how you could get the bag back

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about my luggage that I left at your

station

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yesterday

while

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catching the

train

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and want to give you some advice on how I can collect it. Regarding my journey, I made a travel plan and booked the

train

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ticket from Chandigarh city to Amritsar city for yesterday. My

train

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was all set to leave platform number 2, sharply at 9 a.m.

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, because of being myself a bit late, I completely forgot one of my bags at the railing

station

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after the security check in order to catch the

train

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in a rush. Even though I was successful in getting on the

train

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, I realised about left my bag on platform number 2 when the

train

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left the railway

station

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. The luggage that I forgot was a medium-sized red coloured bag. Not only does it have four wheels but

also

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has two additional zips on the sides.

Although

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I locked

this

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suitcase properly and put my name tag on it, the reason I am most worried about it is that my academic documents are in it which I need on an urgent basis.

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, after calling the Lost & Found Counter of your

station

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, I was informed that your staff has found my suitcase,

however

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, they can not send it to my current location.

As a result

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, I am suggesting to you that I can pay mailing charges online to parcel my suitcase at my house address. You can find the address details from my ticket registration number – HAR2045. I would highly appreciate your instant response to

this

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letter. Yours faithfully, Harpal Singh

Submitted by harpal.singh on Sat Sep 02 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

275 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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At the present time, the people of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.

In some parts of world , it’s becoming increasingly popular to try to find out the history of their own family, why do you think people do this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?