You recently made a journey by train. When you got on the train, you realised you had left a bag on the platform. Write a letter to the station manager. In your letter •give details of where and when you left the bag •describe the bag and its contents •suggest how you could get the bag back

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my luggage that I left at your

station

yesterday

while

catching the

train

and want to give you some advice on how I can collect it. Regarding my journey, I made a travel plan and booked the

train

ticket from Chandigarh city to Amritsar city for yesterday. My

train

was all set to leave platform number 2, sharply at 9 a.m.

However

, because of being myself a bit late, I completely forgot one of my bags at the railing

station

after the security check in order to catch the

train

in a rush. Even though I was successful in getting on the

train

, I realised about left my bag on platform number 2 when the

train

left the railway

station

. The luggage that I forgot was a medium-sized red coloured bag. Not only does it have four wheels but

also

has two additional zips on the sides.

Although

I locked

this

suitcase properly and put my name tag on it, the reason I am most worried about it is that my academic documents are in it which I need on an urgent basis.

Therefore

, after calling the Lost & Found Counter of your

station

, I was informed that your staff has found my suitcase,

however

, they can not send it to my current location.

As a result

, I am suggesting to you that I can pay mailing charges online to parcel my suitcase at my house address. You can find the address details from my ticket registration number – HAR2045. I would highly appreciate your instant response to

this

letter. Yours faithfully, Harpal Singh

Submitted by harpal.singh on Sat Sep 02 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

275 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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