15.Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that some feel that it is more appropriate to educate children in a single-sex

school

,

while

others think that they gain more advantages from co-existing schools. In

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essay, I will explain why I tend to agree with the latter. I concede that there are some benefits of being in a separate

school

and perhaps the most obvious one is that students can attain a higher academic score and perform better in studying. If children study in a single-gender

school

, they may well not be disturbed by the opposite gender, and

this

enables them to only focus on learning

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and is potentially absolutely beneficial. My cousin Mick,

for instance

, learns in a boy-only

school

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achieved a high score in his high

school

period. As

such

, he received an invitation from a privileged university in our hometown, which is why learning in single-sex schools can benefit individuals’ academic achievement.

However

, I believe that learning in a mixed-sex

school

has more benefits than that

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a single-sex

school

. One of the most important factors is that boys and girls can adapt to

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reality at an early age and develop relative skills. When they study in a co-educated

school

, they build relationships with each other, in turn allowing them to gain a mutual understanding of different genders. What

this

does is make it incredibly beneficial.

For example

, in China, most schools are co-educated, leading to the development of students’ social skills, and

this

finally

benefits students themselves and a harmonious society. In conclusion,

while

there are some positive effects of being in a single-gender

school

, I believe that attending a mixed-sex

school

is more beneficial for an individual and society.