The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
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The diagram illustrates various steps in which
electricity
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is generated using geothermal energy.
Overall
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, there are five distinct stages in the process of
electricity
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production from geothermal power, starting with the pumping down of cold
water
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and ending with the production of
electricity
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by a generator.
At the first stage
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of the process, cold
water
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travels down a 4.5km long pipe into an injection well. After that, the
water
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goes through an area called the geothermal zone, which contains a lot of hot rocks used to increase the temperature of the
water
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. At the next step, the hot
water
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is transferred into another well called the production well where it is pumped up to a condenser, ready for the next stage. In the condenser, the
water
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transforms into steam and is used to power a turbine, which activates a generator to produce
electricity
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. The resulting
electricity
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is distributed for different purposes via various
electricity
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grids.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • generate electricity
  • diagram
  • volcano
  • magma reservoirs
  • deep underground
  • heat
  • steam
  • geothermal plant
  • turbine
  • condensed
  • pumped back
  • underground reservoirs
  • transmitted
  • power grid
  • distribution
  • continuous
  • renewable
  • volcanic activity
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