Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Many argue that adolescents should select their
job
by themselves as the development of their Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
passion
. However
, many others think that the
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parents
should provide it for them to facilitate the
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their
children
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This
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Nowadays, young
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the young
according to
their passion
and hobby. They believe that by choosing their work
as passion
, they will be able to enjoy the process. Add an article
a passion
Instead
of not working, it is better to work
according to
passion
. For instance
, a girl who likes to photograph and realizes it has become her hobby,
may try to Remove the comma
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more
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be more
being
a professional photographer. Verb problem
become
Furthermore
, she is developing her passion
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specifically
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in choosing
Nonetheless
, some parents
have to facilitate their son
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sons
daughter
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daughters
children
. Parents
prepare for jobs because they want their children
to have a better future. By preparing carefully and being well educated, it is easier for the youngster to do their work
. On the other side, parents
feel it is their responsibility. For example
, parent
who has their own company wants their Add an article
a parent
the parent
children
to continue their business, they provide the children
with the best education, which has a high standard of quality, and indoctrinate the children
to follow their advice. so that parents
feel they have carried out their responsibilities and children
must repay their hard work
.
To conclude
, in my opinion, freeing children
to choose their profession is a good decision for parents
so that children
can know their passion
and develop themselves in their own way.Submitted by rizalestari on
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