Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Many argue that adolescents should select their
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by themselves as the development of their
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.
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, many others think that
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parents
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should provide it for them to facilitate
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children
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’s
career
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in the future.
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this
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essay will discuss both sides of these and add the writer's opinion. Nowadays,
young
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the young
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generation prefers to select their profession
according to
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their
passion
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and hobby. They believe that by choosing their
work
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as
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passion
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a passion
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, they will be able to enjoy the process.
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of not working, it is better to
work
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according to
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passion
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, a girl who likes to photograph and realizes it has become her hobby
,
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may try to
more
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serious and
being
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a professional photographer.
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, she is developing her
passion
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more
specific
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with choose
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in choosing
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the character of the photo.
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, some
parents
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have to facilitate their
son
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or
daughter
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daughters
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since they were
children
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.
Parents
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prepare for jobs because they want their
children
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to have a better future. By preparing carefully and being well educated, it is easier for the youngster to do their
work
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. On the other side,
parents
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feel it is their responsibility.
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,
parent
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a parent
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who has their own company wants their
children
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to continue their business, they provide the
children
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with the best education, which has a high standard of quality, and indoctrinate the
children
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to follow their advice. so that
parents
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feel they have carried out their responsibilities and
children
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must repay their hard
work
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.
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, in my opinion, freeing
children
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to choose their profession is a good decision for
parents
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so that
children
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can know their
passion
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and develop themselves in their own way.
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