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Some people think that water is an important natural resource and government should have a control on water supply as it in limited. Other do not agree with this statement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nature has blessed us abundance of natural resources for the survival of living beings. Preseny, some
people
 assert that
water
 is a significant natural resource but scarcity of
water
 is a worrying concern.
Thus
, it is necessary to control the supply of
water
.
By contrast
, others have conflicting views.
This
 essay intends to account for both sides with my own
preception
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. There are manifold points to endorse the former view. First and foremost, the demand for fresh
water
 is exceeding the supply and
therefore
 it is necessary to control the supply by making strict laws or rules. To make it clear, the population of the whole world has been growing noticeably for the
last
 few decades. More and more
people
 on the planet need more
water
 for their daily needs
such
 as washing clothes, cleaning, drinking and making food.
On the other hand
, the level of fresh
water
 is declining because of lack of rainfall, deforestation and climate changes.
Therefore
 it is important to make some rules so that the waste of
water
 can be controlled and supply
water
 in a wise manner. What is more, controlling the supply of
water
 can discourage the careless attitude of
people
 towards the use of
water
.
For example
, in some countries,
people
 show careless
attitude
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attitudes
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 towards
water
 and
wastewaterwater
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wastewater
 in
a huge amounts
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huge amounts
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.
People
 consume more than necessary for different purposes
such
 as washing and other household purposes. In some rural areas,
people
 do not have tap
controller
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controllers
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 and it leads to
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the wastage
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wastage
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 of
water
.
Thus
,
government
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the government
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 should regulate the supply
that
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so that
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people
 do not take
water
 for granted. Numerous can be mentioned to
endore
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endorse
 the latter
initially
.
Water
 is a more salient basic need for
survival
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the survival
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 of mankind and controlling the
water
 supply can
be cause
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cause
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 many
inconvenience
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inconveniences
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.
For example
,
people
 need
water
 for their daily needs and in
the
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big
faimly
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families
people
 may face many problems in the shortage of
water
.
People
 cannot be able to manage their daily needs if the supply is limited because of control. Needless to say, limiting the
avilibility
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availability
 of
water
 is not justifiable.
Moreover
,
government
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 should make efforts to explore
water
 sources rather than controlling the supply. To recapitulate,
undependable
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apply
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, the
for
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water
 is most important and it should be kept free from restrictions.
However
, in my opinion, taking the scarcity of
water
 into consumption, it has become urgent
make
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to make
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 some rules for the usage of
water
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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