The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented chart provides information on the rate of children aged 5-12 that commute to school by various
ways of transport from 1990 to 2010.
As is observed , in 1990 not only walking but
also
buses were the most popular modes of transport
Among students ,however
,travelling by car ,cycling , both walking and bus
were the least popular. On the other ,side both cars and walking were the highest in 2010, besides
that, cycling ,bus
, walking and bus
together were the lowest in 2010.
To commence, the second way of transport was over 12 million
in1990 which decreased to 6 million
in 2010.
In contrast
, car passengers were above 4 million
which surged to around 11 million
students in 2010.furthermore
,
bus
, walking and bus
together were around 7 and under 6 million
respectively. which declined to under 6 million
followed by walking and bus
which reduced to approximately 3 million
people . In a similar fashion
Cycling which had the smallest portion among others was about 6 in 1990 with a reduction of 2 million
in 2010.Submitted by Elisa on
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