ome people with a good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What are the problems caused by this?

It is argued that citizens of many countries having excellent knowledge and experience prefer to
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settle
in abroad. They choose
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and quality of life. There are
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of advantages and disadvantages which
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will discuss in
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paragraph. In my agreement person who has spent a lot of money on education and skill improvement
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to explore
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foreign
countries where anyone can improve his purchasing power. Every person wants to get his dreams fulfilled so in
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to search
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requirement one make a decision to move outside his country. On the other way, there are some disadvantages as well. One of the
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is,
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it is very difficult to adjust
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themselves
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their
enviornment
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environment
. People face
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of
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struggles
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during their stay and end up with
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frustration
frustrations
.
For
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if anyone
move
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from
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their
homeland he
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find
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living
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situation tough. In conclusion, there are both pros and cons to
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and
work
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away from
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country.
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